Very impressive

This type of art is very good, because you did a good job with the storyhoard and mixing everything up with it. It has it's own unique taste, with the clocks with bodies, and plenty of plot twists. Overall, it was good, with that mix of music, and the devil person.

Not bad...

It needs more work, but it's a good concept. You could follow up with a series of hunting the robe. And make the robe more detailed and 3D. It looks more like a blob.

Graphics are not that good, and it had shoddy work in it, but it's your first time, so hey.

I love it!

It took you guys a long time eh?
I think it's great, especially the storyline.
Keep up the good work!

Here comes Constructive Criticism!

Oh.My.GOD! How I hate this game! It's utterly horrible! Let me give a detailed list of explanations why your game sucks in my eyes!
-Your jumps have to be very precise.
-Blocks play such a major role in this, that you MUST have your shell. In the original side scrolling Mario, it was no big deal if you couldn't break blocks or not. Here, your shell is like God's Blessing.
-Having your fire button as the same button as the run button was kind of convenient. Never got me killed, but it's plausible. Your jumps have to be very precise. You're also quite an asshole for just putting flying Yoshi's there, so people think: I must jump on that to get across. But no, you can just Super Jump across, in any form.
-When you try to jump on enemies above you, you either die or lose your upgrade, and then die. Take that stupid bird on level 2 for an example, at the start. If you're below it, you don't have to jump on it, but the reason why it's there is to get jumped on from lower ground. You could actually jump over it if you were on higher ground.
-Since these conveniently located flaws usually kill you in the start, what's the point of "continuing"? Just go to the map screen, reload your game, and start over without losing a life. Utterly stupid.
-In the Thwomps section, you can't actually run past them while they fall. That's right. Then again, they're slow enough, so I'll give you credit for that. Nice job on pissing the shit out of me for that one. I was pretty close to the end.
I couldn't even get past level 2. The ONLY re-deeming aspect of this game is that you put SO many secrets in it, I can actually get by with all of them at my disposal. Not to mention your one up system sucks. Normally, in the original Mario brothers, you could walk BLINDFOLDED, and get a 1 up from the excessive coins. Here, it's just pointless as shit. I used that system once, and ended up in the middle of level 2, no shell, 3 lives. Now refund my 2 hours of life spent. Normally, I can beat any game, but this game just sucks too much for me to actually beat it. I Wanna Be The Guy was okay, but this is worse. It's majorly horrendous. Fix these flaws come back later, and show me a better game.

This game deserves some serious grading.

This game has many cons and pros, and I will name many of them. First of all, this game was intended to be "easier" providing that it was with futuristic technology. However, that does not mean the futuristic technology should be harder to handle. Even if you use old fashioned methods of saving people, you should still have to pluck out your tools manually, even if that confused some people. Also, there was NO terror to the game at all. There are no "consequences" for losing. It isn't as tragic seeming as the deaths of Dark Cut 2.

I highly disliked the sedate option, and how it was in the upper right corner. I beat the game without it until I discovered it was there. When I simply sedated once, I beat every surgery, with my super efficient skills obtained from Dark Cut 2, fairly easily. There could probably be more options, and perhaps more surgeries. This was definitely a step up for the "noobs" but I recommend optimizing it for both sections. Also, a lot of the "flashes" in the submarine were HIGHLY irritating while pulling out the pipe. I could not keep focused for the life of me. That was not "hard", merely unfairly irritating.
-Guywhospamsalotohyea

A quick, fun thing for mostly everyone.

Not too bad! I got up to the real pirate king Atomsk before getting hit by his guitar. Damn is he fast. The ninja girl kicks ass too. How you owned her is very suggestive indeed. A giant sword right between her legs.
Basically, a good, fun concept, with decent graphics
I like pie. A LOT! Nice collection of weapons you have there.
You could improve by adding other actions, though I don't reccomend it, since it's a quickie.